Tuesday, March 31, 2009

What's in My Journal?


Shelves filled with my
  great golden trophies.
  Posters of the Jonas
  Brothers hung here and
  there.  Music cranked up 
  playing Z97.1.

Traveling everywhere.  The
  Sweet taste of chocolate
  ice cream and rainbow 
  Dip-N-Dots.  The click of
  buttons while texting or
  IMing.

Bike rides to the boat launch.
  A few colorful castes, each carrying
  unforgettable memories.

-Kylie Austin

Sunday, March 29, 2009

Currently Reading...

Finished It...


Life as We Knew It, by Susan Beth Pfeffer

Rating: ☆☆☆☆☆

I'm going to hold off on a full book review for now and instead just reaffirm what I said in class: Life As We Knew It, by Susan Beth Pfeffer is one of the best books of the year. An asteroid hits the moon and knocks it out of its orbit. Tsunamis, volcanoes, and array of other natural disasters wreak havoc all over the planet. The story is told in the first person point of view, through sixteen year-old Miranda's diary entries. Her family--mom and two brothers--make preparations and then struggle to survive as power is lost, food becomes scarce, and the planet's temperature plummets. Pfeffer makes the tale frighteningly real with a plethora of rich, shocking details. Although a couple of conflicts are left somewhat unresolved, I highly recommend that all of you give this one a try.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

The Consequences - Student Essay


The Consequences
by Anthony Dushane

There are many risks associated with pregnancies.  Some of the biggest risks include drinking, using drugs, and smoking during pregnancy.  The consequences of these actions can be life-altering.
The use of alcohol among pregnant women can severely affect an infant's growth and health.  Children with fetal alcohol syndrome may be born small, have problems eating and sleeping, and suffer with vision and hearing issues.  "Bearing a child is a huge responsibility," says mother Janelle Gallo, "and if you abuse it, you are irresponsible and selfish."  About one in every one thousand babies is born with fetal alcohol syndrome, according to RN Jan Nissl.  Drinking while pregnant can also affect a baby's facial features.  It may have a small head, flat face, and narrow eye openings.  Heavy alcohol abuse can also lead to miscarriage, still birth, or a baby being born premature.
Another big issue with pregnant women is smoking.  Many of the same risks you take as a smoker can put your baby at risk too, claims the Web MD Medical Reference page.  Babies exposed to nicotine in the womb may also have reduced lung capacity and are at higher risk for sudden infant death syndrome (S.I.D.S.).  I have seen a few babies whose mothers smoked when they were pregnant and the babies just didn't look healthy.  The ones I have seen were very little and were very irritated.  Smoking may also increase a baby's heart rate and increase the chances of miscarriage and still birth, says the Cleveland Clinic Website.
Drug use is another major problem with pregnant women and can be fatal.  According to the National Institute on Drug Abuse, using drugs while pregnant can cause birth defects, premature babies, underweight infants, and still birth.  Marijuana can cause behavior problems, brain structure changes that persist into adolescence, and attentiveness problems.  Cocaine is one of the most deadly drugs that a woman could use during pregnancy because it can cause strokes in an unborn fetus, resulting in brain damage or death, although all illegal drugs are very dangerous.  According to the FDA, even drugs as simple as caffeine can cause problems in an unborn fetus.
Obviously, drug, alcohol, and tobacco abuse among pregnant women can be life-altering.  Future mothers should strongly consider the consequences of abusing these substances.

Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Long time, no post...

I've been swamped, but Anthony Dushane's essay will be published on The iBlog by tomorrow, 3/25.  I finished Life As We Knew It on Friday.  I'll get my review online as soon as possible.  

Thursday, March 19, 2009

New Writers Coming Soon

Congrats to Anthony Dushane, Kylie Austin, Sara Plude, James Blanchard, Tucker Ward, and Cody O'Hara for being the newest writers to be published on The iBlog.  Anthony's essay will appear tomorrow, while our other five writers will have their "What's in My Journal?" poems published next week.  I'm looking forward to giving these pieces of writing a second look once they're online.  Nice job, everyone.

Monday, March 16, 2009

Finished It...


Shift, by Jennifer Bradbury

Rating: ☆☆☆

This was a title I had been waiting to read since November when we scanned the nominations for the 2009 ALA Best Books for Young Adults. Shift ended up making the cut, though I'm not entirely sure I agree.

Best friends Chris and Win have been planning a cross-country cycling trip for months, and right after their high school graduation, they decide to hit the road. Not only are they avid bikers, but they have other motivations for the trip--the two can enjoy one last hurrah together before they part ways, with Chris headed to Georgia Tech and Win to prestigious Dartmouth in the fall; they can spend the summer away from their annoying parents, Chris's mom is a nagger, and Win's dad a control freak; and they can bask in the glory of cycling from West Virginia all the way to Seattle, Washington. The twist is that Chris returns from the epic journey, but Win does not--he disappears, and Chris is left to pick up the pieces and try to figure out what happened to his best friend, while dealing with pressure from the F.B.I. and Win's powerful father.

The story is told through from the first person, with Chris as the protagonist. The chapters alternate--one chapter will be set in the present day, with Chris being questioned by investigators, and the next chapter will be a flashback to the cycling trip itself. This format sounds confusing, but as long as readers make this observation early on, the story is quite easy to follow.

As is evident with the rating, I had a few problems with this book. First, some of the characters didn't seem real to me. Chris's mom is your typical paranoid, worrisome parent, though this was a minor annoyance since her role lessens as the story progresses. Win's father also felt a bit wooden. As the owner of a chemical factory, he is extremely wealthy, but Bradbury tries too hard to make him look like a rich tyrant; she relies too much on dialogue and not enough on action. While he's supposed to come across as intelligent and maniacally by-the-book, his speech is clumsy, cluttered, and awkward. However, my biggest beef is with the story itself and the naivety of Chris. I could sort of tell what Win's fate was fairly early, thus ruining any sense of mystery. The clues that Chris receives regarding his whereabouts seemed blatantly obvious to me, but for some reason, it takes Chris a few chapters for the light bulb to kick on. The flashbacks provide a wealth of indicators as to Win's fate as well. Chris is Win's best friend, yet he can't see all the evidence right in front of him? Please.

I still gave this book a solid three-star rating, and if you like missing-person related stories, you would probably enjoy this book. There are also rewarding themes of friendship, growing up, and the need for independence. I still wondered where Win was throughout, I was just disappointed to realize that my early assumptions were correct. I was hoping Bradbury was going to pull a Pete Hautman on me, but it didn't happen.


Updates


I haven't had a chance to finish my review of Shift, but I promise to have it finished and online this week.  Also, there will be at least two new writers published on the iBlog in the days ahead. 

There is a heavy focus on crafting poetry during writing workshop time right now.  This will continue through the end of the quarter, and another poetry assignment will likely be added next week.  Tomorrow's mini-lesson will focus on avoiding verbs with "ing" endings in your poetry.  These verbs are known as participles, and they're weak and disgusting.  :)  They're about as handsome as the guy in the picture.  More to come tomorrow. 

Saturday, March 14, 2009

Currently Reading...

Welcome Mrs. Price!

Another day, another teacher joins our blog.  Thanks, Mrs. Price.  On a different note, I finished Shift yesterday.  I have mixed feelings about it.  Look for my review later this weekend.  I hope you like it, Tiff!

Thursday, March 12, 2009

Welcome Mr. Burgey!

Just wanted to give my pal Mr. Burgey a shout out.  Thanks for following our blog.  In other news, I'm trying to finish Shift tonight.  We'll see if I can stay awake long enough.  I'm also finalizing the new book order.  With the left over grant money, it looks like I'll have enough to get about eight new hardcover books.  See you all tomorrow.  

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Currently Reading...


So far so good.  This is a title I purchased off the new ALA Best Books for Young Adults list.  Several of you have recommended that I read it, including our newest follower.  Oh, and Tay--love the changes.

Monday, March 9, 2009

Finished It


The Road of the Dead, by Kevin Brooks

Rating: ☆☆☆☆☆

After feeling betrayed by the two books I started after finishing Mancusi's novel Gamer Girl--shame on you John Green and Alex Flinn--I started reading The Road of the Dead somewhat reluctantly. However, I was shocked with the way the book hooked me right from the get-go. An interesting storyline, memorable characters, a break-neck pace, and tons of action made Brooks's book a five-star title for me.

The protagonist is fourteen year-old Ruben, who can involuntarily read minds and see people's thoughts. As he is working on the family car one day, he suddenly gets a vision that his sister--miles away in a small village outside London--is in danger and is about to be attacked. He soon discovers that she was murdered. Frustrated with a stalled police investigation, Ruben's older brother, Cole--a street-fighting, tougher-than-nails bad boy--decides to head to the scene of the crime and discover the truth himself. Ruben convinces Cole that, while he has little control over his telepathic abilities, he would be of aid given their frequency, and Cole finally allows him to come along.

To call Cole heroic would be an understatement. He has the confidence, strength, and iron will that Ruben lacks. Readers learn that the boys' father, Baby-John Ford, was a champion street fighter in London, but is now serving prison time after one battle got out of hand. Cole carries on this legacy, and has a reputation on the streets. While he comes across as a bit too helpless at times, Ruben is still likable, despite the fact that his inaction is maddening in a couple of heart-wrenching scenes. The villains are especially memorable in this one. I'm not sure I have ever hated a character as much as Red, a scoundrel who makes things difficult for Ruben and Cole as they try to uncover the secrets behind their sister's murder. Ironically, he even dresses in a red suit. Trust me, you will despise him just as much as I did.

The pace and action really take this book to another level. Brooks does many things well here, but his greatest asset is getting right to the point. Scenes of inactivity and back story are few and far between. The action is non-stop, and complete with fist fights, group brawls, and shootouts. The fighting scenes read like they were right out of an action movie, without the cheesy special effects and such, fortunately. Violence and some mild language are the only content issues to note.

If I had one criticism it would revolve around Ruben's visions. Sometimes they are kind of confusing and hard to follow. A few crucial scenes are told through visions, and the verb tense actually shifts to the present. Ruben sees and tells the story, but through the eyes of another character. I realize how odd that sounds, but you really have to read the book to see exactly what I mean. Otherwise, the use of the first person point of view works well. I just can't help but think that the book would have worked just fine if Ruben were a normal boy without the ability.

Overall, The Road of the Dead is a book that shouldn't be missed by action and horror fans alike, even if the story actually reads more like a piece of contemporary realistic fiction. I thoroughly enjoyed this roller coaster ride of a story. Brooks addresses themes like family, corruption, and racism. This one is definitely worth your time, and you'll be glad you gave it a shot.



Homework

Homework assignments and due dates will permanently be listed on the site.  Check out the list to the right.  I have almost finished The Road of the Dead and I plan to change the cover photo today.  

Sunday, March 8, 2009

Becoming a follower...

I'm not going to allow people to follow the blog if their chosen name looks like garbage (what i mean is a random bunch of keystrokes).  If you want to follow the blog, include something in your screen name that tips me off that you're one of my students (or a parent or colleague).  I blocked three users in the past couple of days for having log-in names that looked something like this: a;lkdal;dkjasd;lgkjad.  You get the idea.  I think it's spam and I want to keep things legit around here.  If by some chance I accidentally blocked a student, parent, or someone else affiliated with the school, please let me know. 

Thursday, March 5, 2009

Currently Reading...

I've all ready plowed through sixty pages and this one is great so far.  I have my fingers crossed that it's a keeper.  The setting is England, and the protagonist is a fourteen year-old who can read minds.  Yes, I know.  Pretty cool.  I'll have more to say tomorrow.  Okay, back to my book...-Mr. Lang

Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Coraline


You may have seen previews of the new movie Coraline, which is in theaters now.  This film is based on the book Coraline, by Neil Gaiman, and I have copies in the reading lounge.  If the movie previews looked appealing, why not give the book a try?  The book was a strange, creepy read for me last year, but I gave it a favorable rating.

Poetry Assignment


For those of you who are currently ahead, or for those who are waiting to get essay D1 back, you can start writing some poetry: I expect two free verse poems to be drafted and final copied by the end of the quarter.  The due dates are as follows.



Free verse poem #1: Final copy due by 3/20
Free verse poem #2: Final copy due by 4/3

Remember, conscientious students  plan ahead.  Why not try one of the "What's in My Journal" poems that we read today?  These are metaphorical snapshots of who you are as young adults.  They are similar to the "Where I'm From" poetry we wrote early in the school year.  Take a look at your "Where Poetry Hides" lists to come up with some ideas.  I told you earlier in the year that poetry deserves the same attention as prose, and I plan to stick to what I said.

As for the picture, that handsome devil is William Carlos Williams.  Go figure.  -Mr. Lang

Monday, March 2, 2009

Homework: 3/2-3/6

Here are the homework assignments and due dates for the week of March 2nd-6th.

1.  Read for thirty minutes daily.
2.  Journal letter #2-3 due by Friday, 3/6
3.  Essay final copies due Friday, 3/6 (remember, this assignment is worth 300 points)
4.  Read new iBlog content at least every other day.  Be sure to bookmark the page.
-Mr. Lang

Sunday, March 1, 2009

Finished It

Gamer Girl, by Mari Mancusi

Rating: ☆☆☆☆☆

I have read many good books this year, but Gamer Girl ranks up there with Strasser's Boot Camp and Flinn's Fade to Black as one of the elite. A spirited protagonist and interesting conflicts make this one a winner.

Teen Maddy Starr has to deal with three layers of conflict in the story: her parents' divorce, a new school (and bully in mega-jerk Billy Henderson), and her obsession with Fields of Fantasy, an online video game. Maddy is the real deal as a main character. She wears her heart on her sleeve and speaks the truth, which readers will appreciate. I especially liked Maddy's comments about moving from a Boston city school to rural New Hampshire. She scoffs at the bad fashion taste of the student body when she enters her new school for the first time: "It was as if I'd wandered into a living, breathing American Eagle commercial. Shudder."
As you can tell from the above quotation, the story is told in the first person point of view. Maddy is an honest, sad, angry young lady who I sympathized with right away. She's frustrated that her parents are divorced and that she has to endure life with her unicorn-crazy grandmother (trust me, you will love grandma, though she is sadly under-utilized). Maddy is angry with school bully Billy Henderson for labeling her "freak girl," and for the fact that she will never have a chance with his strikingly handsome friend, Chad Murray. Maddy's only solace comes from playing Fields of fantasy, where she can transform into Allora, a magic-casting Elfin princess. Before long she befriends another teen player in the game, aptly named Sir Leo. Her interactions with this new friend play a crucial role in the climax of the plot and leads to an interesting twist.
Maddy isn't your stereotypical, mopey teenage main character. Her thoughts, words, and actions all jumped off the page as real. I was rooting for her the entire time. Throughout the novel, she learns to respect and stand up for herself, and learns her own personal charms are even greater than the Elfin princess she created. Give this one a try. -Mr. Lang